This is my concrit post. Comments are screened, so~ if you have something you need to say, go ahead and tell me. I'll listen!

My fucking father!

He decided that Asch and me being around each other is a danger, since we're "the fon Fabre twins," which apparently holds some importance in the yakuza world not that I would know, as Asch and Father try to keep that stuff from me a lot.

Anyways, he thinks that the reason Asch got shot was because we were together... Which would mean it was my fault for asking him to come trick-or-treating with me...

But banning us from seeing each other is going too far!

Asch... he's...

In the hospital. Again.

Halloween's coming up, right?

Asch, take me trick-or-treating or something. I never get to spend any time alone with you anymore.

Happy Birthday, Kadaj!

You better have fun at this party, you hear?

I hate how I feel so stupid because I have to repeat a year in school.

Jesus.

Someone tell me why my brother is such an idiot!

I don't even know what do to-- Dad'll find out soon, and that can't end well.

I'm... actually really worried about him. I hope he's okay...

Asch, what are we doing about school now, anyways?

I don't like being back home.

I don't like being back home because that means that Asch is busy doing all that stupid family stuff.

He told me not to worry about it. To forget that our family's reputation even existed, but that's really hard to do!

I'll keep trying because I told him I would. But it's not my fault if it doesn't work.

Ugh. Asch, let's just stay here on this island so that we don't have to deal with that curfew shit.

Asch... I know you said it would take you a few days to get everything sorted out, but whenever you're finished... Lloyd came up with a really good idea. He said that we should go somewhere. Just you and me. What do you think?

Asch.

We need to talk.

So... I... I was an idiot and I left.

And I knew Asch was still sick, dammit, but I left anyways! I had to...

But. He's in the hospital. Again.

I can't help but feel like it's all my fault...

He probably doesn't even want to see me.

Home is... home. It's weird.

Mother won't stop hugging both me and Asch, and stuff like that. Like, she'll come in while we are trying to sleep and just stare at us. It's so annoying! It's like she thinks we are just going to leave again. Well, I kind of want to...

Anyways, I'm not sick anymore, but Asch still is, and I'm getting kind of worried. Mother's been babying him and taking care of him, but it doesn't seem to help. Even she thinks we should take him to the hospital just to get checked out.

Guy, when did you want to go out and do something...? Anything to save me from being here, works really.

...

Screw you, Asch.

So I got a job. Well, sort of anyways.

I found this flyer when I was walking around the downtown. Some 'escort' company was looking for people to 'entertain.' Escorts are like... drivers, aren't they? I mean, I can't drive, and I told that guy that when I called, but he laughed and said that was fine as long as I entertain well enough. I guess I know some pretty good jokes? And I got bored and taught myself to juggle one day. That's entertainment, right?

So, he said I had to go try out with him later on today.

Asch, you better be happy that I am getting a job!

Oh yeah, guys! I have a cell phone now. Texting is really fun and convenient! But I may have already gone over my texting limit... oh well, what's 5 cents a message anyways?

Also... we are visiting Mother and Father soon. I guess I miss Mother, but... I'm afraid to see Father a little bit.

Asch, if you want...

I think I am okay to not have to stay with you anymore.

So you don't have to put up with me, if you don't want to...